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So sad, isn't it?
So sad, so many in despair,
So far down,
So past help,
So far, no one to help.

So let me be there,
So let me help,
Sew your soul together
So you remain alive,
So many happy, aren't you glad?
:iconidoartguy:
Strange form of a poem I'm trying.
"So" is the word focused on, and the poem flips in the second stanza to the opposite of the first ^^
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:iconsingingems7:
~SingingEms7 May 28, 2012  Student Writer
Very nice! :D It's great to try new things :)
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:iconidoartguy:
~idoartguy May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yes ^^
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*xxRyRa5bbit May 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Peculiar but intriguing experiment
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:iconidoartguy:
~idoartguy May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks ^^
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:iconxxryra5bbit:
*xxRyRa5bbit May 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem
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Mood: Love ~HowlingSpiritLupus May 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautifully written! :D Love it. Remarkable.
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~sunnytheangel May 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
mario:*sad about toad died*

Me:SAD ISNT IT?!?!?!?C:<
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:iconidoartguy:
~idoartguy May 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
xD
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~someone-once-said May 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
interesting experiment! :D it turned out really well :)
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~idoartguy May 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks ^^
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